Below are some alternatives which may be used to improve the sentence by replacing the word in bold. You may choose option 1, 2, 3 or 4. In case no improvement is needed, choose 5.
From the dining-room on my left, there came the battle of tea-cups and the short, dry cough of my sister, Maya.
1
rattle
2
cattle
3
saddle
4
wattle
5
No improvement